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your poem takes the reader to another world filled with thoughts, meaning and feeling

Very rich poetic write very.....well express

'I close my eyes and I feel its warmth.. I feel a shiver run up my spine. And I feel the healing rays enlightening my spirit.. It's so peacefull and overgrown with trees, Like a beautiful picture of woman and nature in harmony...' I like your introspection in this poem and the serenity that surrounds while reading it.

Your poem is like a beautiful painting. You have painted the canvas of life with lively colors.

A nameless color.. beautiful play with words, that reaches out and splashes its unknown colors on the readers and soak them in emotions. The color that we want to put in our lives to relate to things, to make them beautiful and lively like the color themselves.

‘…Crystallized soprano and bass…’ Just tweeting your color and woofer of lovesmile... whispering… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

So strong your utterance, so soft your word-choice- a real poet can only spell such a way. Marieta, you got already your colour when you tell in search of light you defeat your dreams and illusion. Very straight your choice but Poet would you tell where Light resides? In the heart or in the Brain. Put you on marks +++ Apoet Bangla

And I feel the healing rays enlightening my spirit.. .......I like this line...is in line with my reiki healing....Thankyou for sharing

Hi Mari - What is the colour of true love - is it as elusive as true love is? ? ? ? There is a plethora of both abstraction and uncertainty in this poem Angel - which makes analyisi elusive. I recompose your image in reds and violets form the opposite ends of the visible spectrum - your heat retreats into the infrared - your cool energy advances into the ultraviolet rendering you simultaneously both visible and invisible. In your poetry you employ the all the colour of the PAINTER all the vibes of the ARTIST and all the subtlety of the PHILOSOPHER. It really is a 'Fusion of individuality wit (your) being and God'. All your poetry is very spiritual. 'And you're there........ It's only who me can see you....... You're my eternity'. I can feel this Mari - even if my linguisitc analysis is very imperfect - because it's poetry - feeling supercedes understanding. 'I feel the healing rays enlightening my spirit - It's so peaceful overgrown with trees - like a beautiful picture of a (very beautiful) woman and nature in harmony'. Do you see only yourself Mari or do you see someone who loves you so intensely - and whose love you reciprocate so perfectly - that you become one image in each others minds - a perect symbiosis of two souls bound by eternal love. Thank you for sharing. love you in poetry - JOHN X X X

A very impressive poem. I agree that you used the simile and metaphor in a great way! ! This verse is my favourite-And I defeat my dream as I defeat an illusion..- Great Work!

Extraordinary use of simile and metaphor has produced this memorable poem. Your eloquence becomes you. My applause.10/10. Warm regards, Sandra

Ah! yes the serene bliss in witnessing us defeating our most awry dreams is so wonderful. Your poem cascades in imaginary momentum. Very elegant poem.