Monday, November 12, 2018

Unknown Beauty Comments

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The fancy moon
Though barren but beautiful.
The autumn rose,
Twinkling with its thorn.
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Bhavika Jain
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Dev Anand 23 November 2018

A reverse rainbow like smile. Like chocolate in the voice, .. not knowing the person whom you love you write such beautiful lines, you have a romantic heart.

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Bhavika Jain 23 November 2018

Thanks. Being a romantic heart that would be the last comment my family and friends would give. Maybe you can say, I have a secret romantic heart.

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Jazib Kamalvi 22 November 2018

Write comment. A good start, Bhavika. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Bhavika Jain 23 November 2018

Thanks. I have read ur poem and it's phenomenal

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 November 2018

A reverse rainbow like smile. Like chocolate in the voice, The autumn rose and the fancy moon and the rainbow., wonderful imagination dear poetess. write, write and write.. tha nk u. tony

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Khushi 16 November 2018

Amazing poem girl❤️🦋

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Bhavika Jain 16 November 2018

Thank u💝.......

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 November 2018

The autumn rose, Twinkling with its thorn., rainbow, chocolate.embracing the beauty in secrecy...... a fine poem deare poetess. tony

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Bhavika Jain 12 November 2018

Thank u....

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Bhavika Jain 12 November 2018

My heart and I drained it.

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