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Would you come? Come along with me... )))) nice lines.... very emotional message.... something you want to tell somebody for a long time... i like it

Nicely written Howard! ! I believe you spoke of the difference between dreaming and actually been led in a vision. Many tend to put this under the heading of 'being phychic' when many are actually being 'shown' what is too come. Dajavu is a 'feeling' of those visions coming to the surface. Even the Bible speaks of this..ie..'You speak to me in the early hours and tell me of things to come...' and..'I will send dreams and visions...'. This piece captured it well.

In the sanctity of pure love... this kind of poetry is a pleasure to read.... perfect!

To depths of unchanging peace.. Venture with me To those places where I have not yet....... Dreamed ...............true to your words...it's really unknown...but a very beautiful place, .the way you describe...wonderful description...wonderful poetry...very unique...

This is just a wonderful piece to read. I loved every line. You didn't lose me either. That would have been easy to do here. You kept your focus. I don't know how long it took you to write this, but I would be curious to know. A wonderful thing to read. I think you might need to write a book. GW62

The way you described the poem made me want to be right there with you so i could see what would happen next....... I really liked it..... very creative

ver nice poem I like your conection of words, I would love to be able to write poems that dont rhyme as such :)

Glad to comment: Yes, I like this one. But I too need to read through it a few times. Metaphores are lovely. Shall indeed come back to it and browse a while. Adeline

You formulate ideas I have had also in such beautiful language - having that secret dreamworld firmly implanted in the heart and then resonating only with those things in this world that complement the inner dreams - that is the best way of living and lifting up and over the transcendence of ever-changing events; and retaining only the beautiful thoughts and eternal ideas of the sublime of which love is uppermost - as long as it is guided by the even more enchanting grace of wisdom, of course - what a beautiful write, to inspire the reader to take a flight into a different dimension of mental and psychic insight! The place where I can go No one will know It is thought, and I control Where I rule over despair and hidden depths Finding it filled with Ghosts, Angels, And alluring beauity Warmest regards, Margaret Alice.

hmmmmm. i like this one, i guess i need to read throughit a few times. but Garden lady is my fave of all time! !

Thats really nice, its secretive. And so very well described, you can feel the affection, and i love the link to the dream world. Very well sculpted =)

i agre the rythm was a bit hard to follow but that doesn't make the poem less lovely. just two tips: look at the word twilight and the two comas in the third-to-last para. greetings zarina

I enjoyed the topic of this poem very much, yet felt it extremely difficult to follow the rythm you set with your words and structure, that said, I could feel the hope in the last line of your poem, which was a nice way for it to end. All in all I really did enjoy this one, thank you for the read.

Hmm...i agree with the disconnected feeling. Nevertheless it is well placed in setting. I liked the way this poem ended, hopeful in dreams: -) .

very disconnected feeling thruout. which is harsh criticism, considering the nature and weight of the poem. did not keep me enthralled, in the least. had to force myself to read succeeding lines, i hate that. also, check your spelling. it's blasphemy to poetry that someone as popularly read as you on the site should have poor spelling. ~~sjg

wow! this is a really nice poem! i really like it. it has a lot of feeling to it. :)

yo dude this is cool. ur place sounds wicked awesome! why don't u call the poem, my magical plac. i mean sure it makes you think it's some kiddy stuff but it's cool. dude ur poem rocks.

Sir, this poem reveals your ‘stream of consciousness’, the whole set of Imagery streaming inside your mind has come alive in words, we can again visualize the thought on paper, the same poetic language is needed to appreciate it. Do keep in touch with your beautiful poetry and comments

Why this is a beauty of a poem! loved it...I am so glad to discover you today!

That was undescribable. It wrapped me in its grace. Your poetry is, for lack of a better word, fantabulous!