Tuesday, December 18, 2018

Unkee Khusboo Kept Spreading...(Indo -Canadian Poetry) Comments

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I was enjoying bathing
the raat kee ranee
she was such fragrant
I kept on bathing
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 19 December 2018

Way wah aap Urdu/ Hindi behind lighter hayn! Khoob zabardast shairee. Raat ki rani is a flower yeah.? My mom loves it a lot. This is a lovely fragrant floral poem, beautiful to read.. A fine unique combination of Urdu and English. Thumbs up.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 December 2018

shukriya shukriya and more thanks yes night flower full of fragrance is raat kee rani

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Naila Rais 18 December 2018

Unable to understand..... Ooops sorry! ! Hinglish language used....

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