Tuesday, December 23, 2014

University Days Comments

Rating: 5.0

I know like a thief you think of me,
In the diary of dreams you ink of me,
You don't look into my eyes and you don't smile,
You avoid the tracks of a teen juvenile,
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 24 December 2014

Great reminiscence of youthful days of university with an emotional touch so nicely depicted.......amazing write 10/10

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Khalida Bano Ali 24 December 2014

A beautiful recollection.................10

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Valsa George 23 December 2014

Going back to the beautiful university days....! I suppose both of you were in the same university and the teenage love you developed then matured into a stable relationship and ended in your marriage. Over the years your love also has been growing, but lacks the ebullient splendour of your youthful days and now nostalgically you are looking back to those days! Lovely recollections!

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Akhtar Jawad

Akhtar Jawad

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