Universe (Haiku) Comments

Cosmic union......earth meeting sky...loved it

'Earth Vibrating Love'.... Great one! I enjoyed a lot.

~~*~~I enjoy a good haiku. This was a great one!

I enjoy a good haiku. This was a great one!

This is truly compressed energy. The middle line is all energy - and it's a huge reservoir of energy tapping into infinity, fueling two big changes - First the universe shifts in its essential nature and the new universe is a world emanating the power of love instead emanating the love of power. Your haiku accomplishes in a framework of cosmology what I did with mythology in the poem about WAITING FOR THE NON RETURN. WOW! With both science and myth causing cosmic change, E-R-O-S will triumph.

Deeply envisioned. Great write. TFs.