Friday, October 12, 2012

Universe (Alive And Alone) Comments

Rating: 4.9

Someday we'll be one
Mrs. Ground; Mr. Sun
Someday I'll be grass
and your feet will pass
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Ray Quesada
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Sacha Hayes O'grady 28 June 2013

I like this poem a lot. The cycle of life. The seasons of change. An observation we sometimes need reminding of.

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Valerie Dohren 14 October 2012

Interesting and deep. Thought-provoking write.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 13 October 2012

A beautiful poem with underlying meaning delivered straight to the heart. Thanks for inviting me to share such a great write.Best wishes.

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Mimi Mata 12 October 2012

THIS! ! ! ! ! ! ....RAY SOOO EXQUISTE! ! ! ! ....You write from your chakra and your colors are unbelievable...

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