Sunday, October 26, 2008

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You see the sparkling stars,
As you look at the black night,
You see the glimour of the moon,
And its soft white light,
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Jenny O'Kane
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Ben Gieske 29 October 2008

I enjoyed the images and the descriptive adjectives. Nice rhyming too. Well done.

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Jordan Farrell 26 October 2008

That's a really nice poem. Well done ;)

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