~ Universal Us ~ Comments

nice. Thanks for sharing.

I needed to get into a poetical mind to fully appreciate this piece. So much going on, but letting the words flow...universal, unison, us the alliteration drew the meaning to me. Great poem.

Well done modern poetess

Well done modern poetess

Universal Us, what a powerful thought and you express it with such wonderful style. Kept me think for hours of the words you wrote. I have to agree this is so philosophical. Great write!

Very powerful poem, Niv, and very clever use of the language. I like how your poems inspire thought.

are we? /? universal we are, common among uncommon, unitedly diversified.... nice thought.

Most of us do the wrong pluses and minuses and miserably miss the Universal. It needs wisdom like yours to strike the right balance.Keep sharing great poems of yours.Thanks.

A very odd and strange way to express Universal Us but good. Written to have impact and force. Very Good. Lynn

what a sweet piece..professional way written..appreciated it

Very elegantly composed. Great philosophy. Thanks!

Swami Vivekananda, who was the first religious ambassador to India, fought through out his life for the Universal brotherhood.

I do not like much editing, and the omnibus has some universality about it, It gives true solace. Share what you are inside and feel more secure. Universality has a lot to do with the faith in humanity. The more you know about others, the more you see good in them, and the more your trust in the universal soul. I saw this facet in your poem.10 from me

The Medieval scholars broke their head trying to define the word 'Universal'! The Realists went along with Plato, and claimed that these universal properties also existed like the 'Ideal Form' of Plato! The Nominalists laughed and said that the redness of apples and greeness of trees only existed in individuals objectively! Conceptualists said 'universals' existed only in the human mind, as a concept of the mental kind! This is a small extract from my History of Medieval Philosophy. Kindly find part-I, on page no.2, when you are in a mood! I LIKED YOUR DEFINITION OF THE UNIVERSAL! 10! -Raj

Liked the theme of this poem. Expression is unique but fine.

Unparallel and Universal appeal for today’s mankind… Peace … Peace … Peace

Indeed a poem with deep meaning. Universal Us is the cry of the day. Vedantns [Jnana Yoga] contemplate it

A fine piece of thought. Good.

Our solace is indeed the humnaness we share.10 for your profound thoughts. Kind regards, Sandra

The coveted culmination for Ultimate destination. Ten+++