~ Universal Us ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

Very powerful poem, Niv, and very clever use of the language. I like how your poems inspire thought.

are we? /? universal we are, common among uncommon, unitedly diversified.... nice thought.

Most of us do the wrong pluses and minuses and miserably miss the Universal. It needs wisdom like yours to strike the right balance.Keep sharing great poems of yours.Thanks.

A very odd and strange way to express Universal Us but good. Written to have impact and force. Very Good. Lynn

what a sweet piece..professional way written..appreciated it

nice. Thanks for sharing.

I needed to get into a poetical mind to fully appreciate this piece. So much going on, but letting the words flow...universal, unison, us the alliteration drew the meaning to me. Great poem.

Well done modern poetess

Well done modern poetess

Universal Us, what a powerful thought and you express it with such wonderful style. Kept me think for hours of the words you wrote. I have to agree this is so philosophical. Great write!