Tuesday, March 27, 2007

Universal Show Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ever been to one of those
water fountain shows?
You know with music and lights
and water spouts, at night.
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David Taylor
COMMENTS
Marci Made 27 March 2007

Positively delightful and as always you put a smile on my face...now this is an event I'd love to witness, such fun...............marci.xo

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JoAnn McGrath 27 March 2007

I have to agree with Angie your poems always make me smile Rhythm of the words make you feel like your right there watching the water bouncing around playfully splashing.

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Michelle Tiddy 27 March 2007

Beautiful David! Made me smile and really made me feel as if I were there! ! Great stuff! M.

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Original Unknown Girl 27 March 2007

Superb David, you absolutely brought this to life! Thanks for this poem, it was a wonder to read and participate in! HG: -) xx

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Tranquil Ocean 27 March 2007

Enjoyed the water show...saw one years ago but yours was better! ! Love...TO

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Danny Reynolds 27 March 2007

Well I don't know about anyone else, but I wish I'd worn a raincoat! Absolutely soaked and saturated with images David. Ta. Danny

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