Melting the ice
Flood me wise
Stuck for smiles
Bathe me mist shine
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An amazing write on universal love with a hope to be new golden age for new youth. It may be quoted... This is government of real civilization New golden age for new youth Where each hand holds hands Faith buries dark ages vain Free to love and to be loved The world need love revolution My words are not tounge sensation Toward perfection link the junction For hearts sharing love, life license. I appreciate this poem Thanks for sharing.
Wow...what an amazing collaboration by two very talented poets. A powerful message of universal love which would surely lead to universal peace. What a wonderful world we can create by being more tolerant and forgiving toward one another.10+
Simone, i never though people will rediscover my old poem again..Terrence/ terry is a terrific nice poet...so i would give him credits more that should take because of his willingness to polish the idea and make it nice, the part that not really nice maybe it was mine hahaha...i was new that time :) and people like you and him..as well as other friends here keep me growing as a writer :) Thanks Simone Inez Harriman
The truth! Melting the ice. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Awesome Write! ! ! Very Powerful! ! ! Love Uninhibited! ! ! Freely! ! ! Brings Life To ALL! ! ! Beautiful Write! ! ! Added To Favorites! ! ! Such Beautiful Thoughts! ! ! Thank You So Much For Sharing! ! !
Immerse confidence! ! With the muse of the joy of writing. Thanks for sharing.
I remember so well the joy of writing this poem with Unwritten Soul, the joy of writing, the joy of creation and in this poem the joy of sharing creation. The theme of melting ice I had used in other poems, especially 'A Season Of Growth' which I had posted in my old site but never added the last stanzas too. 'Universal Love' is a bitter sweet memory me for me. I remember the melting ice and playing with those words. Upon leaving Indonesia in 2013 I lost a disc with all my poetry files before April 2011 so this poem finished in May is the only file poem I have from that era, although almost all poems between April 2011 and June 2013 would have been posted on poemhunter.com under my original posting site of Terence George Craddock (Spectral Images and Images Of Light) . So without Unwritten Soul having posted 'Universal Love' here I would now have no memory of the poem and I particularly remember what we wanted to achieve with that poem, the correspondence during the shared adaptive writing. The journey continues Soul God Bless :)
each line compliments extremely well, such a beautiful piece of poetry a great collaboration
Holy spirit, holy stone! Read this poem of my fellow poet with soul as she is soul and she has a great soul, However, Unity and fraternity are ideals needed in this world of robots. After going through the poem, I words of Swami Vivekananda rejigged in my brain, Patriotism is above religion and internationalism is beyond patriotism..... A poem with depth meaning For jotting this poem, to the poet, a lovely begonia! :) :) :)
An amazing write on universal love with a hope to be new goldenA- age for new youth. It may be quoted... This is government of real civilization New golden age for new youth Where each hand holds hands Faith buries dark ages vain Free to love and to be loved The world need love revolution My words are not tounge sensation Toward perfection link the junction For hearts sharing love, life license. I appreciate this poem Thanks for sharing.