Universal Freedom Is...... Comments
Freedom from hunger and freedom from pain
freedom from loss and so freedom from gain.
Freedom to give and freedom to share
freedom from want and that of despair.
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Freedom is precious. Let us be blessed to choose the right, pure and eternal.
Freedom to choose - 'being kind or being right'... Freedom is a choice and decision.. Wonderful thoughts sir George..thank you for sharing
Universal freedom is eternal and infinite bliss we should all therefore be able to realise this....! ! ! Fine poem
Is this poetry? Why do you bogus fellow pollute the site...waste of space! Every stanza is unevenly articulated affecting the flow! No rhymes and rhthm! Why the word freedom so many times? Are your readers donkeys! Better stop writing!
You should learn to write proper English and grammar before anyone can take anything you write seriously Mr Swain because it appears that with most of what you write and offer here one can notice that there's nothing much to gain.
Nice poem George...your use of anaphora throughout the poem is particularly telling.
Thanks for reading and the observation made about the style of the poem in your comments Dominic.
what a great poetic expression on Freedom// love is yeah; freedom is everything; freedom is nothing!
We need to get freedom from hunger, pain and suffering as well as from obstacles and we nee to live peaceful life. This is an excellent thoughtful poem very well penned.10
Yet once more thanks for reading and your thoughtful comments Kumarmani, it's much appreciated.
George, I like the mesmessages this poem and the format.+++10
It would be a wonderful world if everyone was free but alas it is not so.enjoyed reading your poem Alan
Universal freedom is eternal and infinite bliss we should all therefore be able to realise this. Splendid! Thanks a lot for sharing this wonderful poem.
Wow! ! ! ! ! Ever Ever So Beautifully Penned! ! ! ! ! Ever So Beautifully Powerful! ! ! ! ! Magnificent! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Very Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
Wow. Yes, freedom is what we all dream and demand but no one can it all...10
freedom is somthng we dream. what i believe is freedom is an illusion in mind. At one's death one achieve's his freedom from all I very humbly say. A nice poem and thank you George Palitha Ranatunge
Freedom the great thing in a human life and it is nice.
freedom to write freedom to live freedom to give freedom to receive freedom on this planet is only name dont forget
I totally agree with these strong words that jump out at me as I read. Every man and woman should be free. We fight and die for freedom.
beyond the universe i dreamed to built my own universe not in free world not inside any circle in the sphere or around it... looking every night on this small idea on my head.. why to be hunted and never hunt? why to be used and not use? why to be good with who harm me on purpose? why to live like that? but your world became dark to me even in morning light! ! ? my old wise teacher disappear like that... if death took him i will go myself to get him back! ! ! i can't act that i can go on my life like its fun cause its not... HATE YOU.seriously nobody can do the same cause it wasn't acting actress.thanks
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7/19/2025 1:11:42 AM # 1.0.0
Wonderful Poem George! Top stars