Saturday, October 7, 2017

Unity Through Randomness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Some obey scriptures very much,
And some wonder and wander,
There is randomness seen in group,
But unity is happiness they search.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 April 2018

NOTE: in my response number TWO there is an error: quartrain must be: quatrain. Thank you.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 April 2018

Nr. THREE: Absolutely, God is the only Subject in all the poems, the readers who believe will find Unity. Absolutely. Thank you so much for sharing such most beautiful poems about our Lord. Your gift and talents are greatest. A greatest 10 for the vote. God's Blessings in Abundance. Sincerely, God's humble servant, Sylvia France Chan, Dutch Poetess

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 April 2018

Nr. TWO: I have deep respect for each of your tryings to make that visual and clearest. I regard them all as true successes and how! Indeed the grand truth are your two last lines of the last quartrain: There is randomness in thoughts, But truly they search God is unity.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 April 2018

Nr.ONE: You are such a true diligent producing poet IF I may say, Mr. Kumarmani Mahakul. Every poet you have almost read the poems, almost each newest publishings of their poems. In this poetry you are putting them next to each other and made a whole scala of similarities and differences.

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Mihaela Pirjol 24 November 2017

''People in diversity follow rituals, Some worship nature, some universe, There is randomness in thoughts, But truly they search God is unity.'' - in this stanza is embedded the purest truth. No matter the means by which we search: we all search for the meaning of life.

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Troy Cochran 08 October 2017

I am reminded how there are infinite paths through a forest, some well-defined, some never yet ventured, but no one right way that all must walk; and yet the roots of the trees so intertwine as to make of all the separate trees one forest, if not one colossal Tree. Scriptures, rituals, science, art ~ all manner of wonderments, natural and cosmic: One Heart, different beats. Unity THROUGH diversity is a bright torch! An understanding well-attained, and intelligently shared. :) Your compass never fails to point true north.

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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