Monday, July 23, 2018

Unity Of Life Comments

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On shallows of grass,
Through the hills made of green,
The houses are built,
Mainly few n far between,
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Sarah Persson
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Edmund Strolis 12 August 2018

Each bonny wee rabbit! Yes Sarah I have such a creature and she thrills with her visits. Beneath the lilac bush, below the song birds and the ever changing sky. Your poem is a song worth singing. What treasures await open eyes we are rich beings who remember how to be surprised and appreciate. The famous Brit G.K. Chesterton states that there is no lack of wonders and only lack of wonder. An absolute wonder of a poem!

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Sarah Persson 12 August 2018

Thank you so much Eddie for your generous comments. I love the quote There is no lack of wonders and only lack of wonder. This is so very true.

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White Tiger 01 August 2018

This is a beautifuly written poem. I loved it. thank you for your deep and wonderful thoughts Sarah.

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Sarah Persson 01 August 2018

Thank you White Tiger for your lovely comment

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Ruta Mohapatra 23 July 2018

That is paradise you have described! Nice poem!

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Sarah Persson 23 July 2018

Thank you Ruta

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yoonoos peerbocus 23 July 2018

the last part is really soothing/nice to meditate on them

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Sarah Persson 23 July 2018

Such a privelidge Yoonoos

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