Sunday, September 11, 2022

Unity Comments

Rating: 4.9

We shall not be discouraged
From acting together,
By our differences in faith,
Color and race.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 29 December 2022

Very well expressed. Reverberating melody

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Kevin Patrick 22 November 2022

What harmony we can make if we could all get along. I envy the thought you had, humanity as a string of chords. Thats great creativity there. L

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Susan Williams 10 October 2022

the reference to the strings of a guitar was EXACTLY well done! ! ! It gives a visual and auditory light to this poem--awesome write. Top marks! ! !

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Indira Renganathan 19 September 2022

Beautiful poem on the importance of unity

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Rebecca Navarre 14 September 2022

Our prejudices must be cast away, creating such a beautiful song of beauty, peace, and heart! .. Amazing! .. So Awesome! .. Way Beyond #'S! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Like the guitar strings that play in unison creating melodies we have to stand united for a great cause forgetting all our differences..

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 September 2022

Yes! United, we creat a beautiful song together! Marvellous.....10 + To my favourite

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 September 2022

Dearest friend Rose, I love all your poems for the beautiful thoughts reflected in it. They speak of unity, love and strength.

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Bri Edwards 12 September 2022

Rose Marie, do you ever get tired of seeing yourself referred to by 'his' on PH when a Notification says 'Rose Marie Juan-austin has made this poem one of HIS favorites? ? ? : )

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Hey Bri! 12 September 2022

Hey Bri you're spamming the comments section. You selfish piglet. Shut up!

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Bri Edwards 12 September 2022

ONE definition of 'PREJUDICED': 'The act or state of holding unreasonable preconceived judgments or convictions.' WHO GETS TO say WHAT IS 'unreasonable'? ?

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Bri Edwards 12 September 2022

I like the poem. But doing away with 'prejudice' (which I doubt will EVER happen as long as we a 'human') will NOT end all wars and lesser conflicts.: (

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Bri Edwards 12 September 2022

For example, sickle-cell anemia occurs mostly in African Americans, so it is an identifying characteristic of that race. Color covers the pigmentation of the skin.

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Bri Edwards 12 September 2022

(cont.) ....For example, sickle-cell anemia occurs mostly in African Americans, so it is an identifying characteristic of that race. Color covers the pigmentation of the skin.'

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Bri Edwards 12 September 2022

(cont.) ..This might be physical characteristics but it may also be genetic characteristics. (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 12 September 2022

'Race covers the characteristics of a race that people commonly associate with that race.' (cont.) ....

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Sandra Feldman 12 September 2022

A most wonderful poem! Filled with extraordinary sentiment and might. Truth, depth and insight.

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Sandra Feldman 12 September 2022

The song of poets that unites, will have more strength and light and always evil will thus fight,

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 12 September 2022

wonderful write Rose-Marie

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Anjandev Roy 12 September 2022

Such a wonderful piece.....thank u, dear poetess...

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 11 September 2022

Beautiful thoughts on coming together as one to create the harmonious music of love. A timely message. This is in my List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

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