Unity Poem by Rini Shibu

Unity

Rating: 5.0


Feel the warmth of others palm
its the same blood you and me have
Hug and listen to the beats
It's the same pumping heart we all have
Look into the eyes, search for the untold pain
Everyone here have their own story to tell
And the words are poured in their own style
Love and respect the feelings
We are one, let's join our hands
Lock them together through poetry
And let our mind be full of peace
Because tomorrow we may not get this air to breath

Tuesday, November 28, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saravanan Sivasubramanian 28 November 2017

Dear poet, In this poem you reveals about the eternity of nature and Impermanence of human being. (Andletour mind be full of peace Because tomorrow we may not get this air to breath)

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Rini Shibu 29 November 2017

Thanks Saravanan for posting your remarks

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Robert Murray Smith 08 May 2018

A unifying write that is so right.++10 Robert

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Unnikrishnan E S 29 November 2017

(Continued) And your exhortation: We are one, let's join our hands Lock them together through poetry And let our mind be full of peace Because tomorrow we may not get this air to breath Most profound poetry. Great write. I can see a heart full of warmth towards the entire world.... A full 100++

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Unnikrishnan E S 29 November 2017

Hi Rini, Marvelous poetry, here! Yes, we all have the same blood. And on ph, we are able to hold the hands of one another and feel its warmth; hug one another and listen to heart beats of the other person and look into the eyes of the other poet and read his/her heart, pains and pleasures. life. That is what poetry enables us to do. (continued)

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Rini Shibu 29 November 2017

Thanks Unnikrishnan for posting your feedback

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 November 2017

Great poem on love and unity. Beautifully crafted. Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 29 November 2017

Thank you so much kumar for your remarks

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Valsa George 29 November 2017

Feel another's pulse and find a place for others in our heart! Lovely sentiments! A great message of love and unity, Rini ! ! A 10

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Rini Shibu 29 November 2017

Thank you so much for your lovely comment

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