United Forever.... Comments

now I don't know how you gonna be alone sleeping here without lights with no heart to leave you alone, I just slept over your grave people found me motionless beside you the next day Rachel Ann Butler

'i got my smile back... cos from now, I know we are united again for ever... ' touching lines.....beautiful one........

Bittersweet Saddnes, Beauty in your writing....10

wow that is so good. gosh you have amazing talent. i wish i could write such powerful lines like that. but you are 23? and that means you have had more practice. i am determined to get there some day! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! but again you are really good and i enjoy reading your work.

this poem jus touchhhhhhhhhhhhhed me ++++++++++10 regards anjali

Nothing like that comfy lovey