How is it that so many of the people around the world
feel the same about the way our troubles have unfurled,
yet, still there is no simple way to bring about world peace.
Why is it just so difficult to make the heartache cease?
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Hey Mary, that's good! I feel I want to paint a placard for you to go out there and get everyone together. If only, Eh! ! ! It sounds a lovely thought. Sincerely Ernestine
This is a dignified plea for a united earth, Mary. Perhaps you should find words to replace 'higher ups' as I feel this weakens your poem. Just a thought. Raynette
One Good word in mind is better then a thousand lost at war.This is wonderful, another much needed piece of wisdom.love Duncan