Thursday, September 25, 2014

Unite As One Comments

Rating: 5.0

Id like to teach the world to live as one as life is to grow
I wish I could prove that hatred is wrong and we must survive tomorrow

I cannot see how bare hands can hurt, can fight and can kill
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Lyn Paul
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Savita Tyagi 17 January 2018

The sadness reflected in poem consumes us all. It hurts, it gives us pain and we cry for solutions to get rid of this perdition. Thank you Lynn Paul for this beautiful poem full of heartfelt emotions.

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David Wood 17 January 2018

We can understand the wonders of the vast universe, the simple beauty of a rose or complex maths problem, but we will never understand the destructiveness of the human mind. Well done Lyn on being poem of the day: -)

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James Mclain 17 January 2018

Lyn, congratulations on your poem of the day.. James McLain

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Rajnish Manga 17 January 2018

Thank you very much for recalling the spirit of so many popular songs of our time by great singers and artists who all want the war to end and peace to prevail in all parts of the world. This is just awesome. No More War.... For too many lives have been lost.... Nothing gained, who can explain, What has this been for

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 January 2018

Very nice poem with a great message fr unity and integrity. Thanks for sharing.

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Bernard Snyder 17 January 2018

Such a touching poem my friend. Congrats on a well deserved poem of the day.

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Bharati Nayak 17 January 2018

WE all have a God, Yet there is just One God he is there for us all He wants us to belong You, Me bring peace, Let the world be free We can Unite As One 'Speaking words of wisdom'Let Us Be! - - - - - - - - -A beautiful poem, a wish to see the world free from wars and violence.Let us pray God to bring peace to the earth.

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Tom Allport 17 January 2018

wonderfully well written Lyn.

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Tom Allport 17 January 2018

a poem full of wise words that the ones in power should now heed for we the ordinary people want to live in peace and harmony with no more wars please let love open only happy doors?

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 17 January 2018

Let this happen as you and we wish but alas the world is so blinded with egos peace is becoming a dream..... Lyn.........profound thought translated into a great piece of poetry.......cong. for being selected as P.O.D

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 January 2018

Lyn, such a powerful poem...congrats for being chosen...a huge 10+++

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Geetha Jayakumar 12 October 2014

Great poem Lyn, We too agree with you. We all expect only Peace and Love. A big NO to war and hatred...Loved reading it.

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Alice Cordy 06 October 2014

Well put together Lyn, so many of agree with you.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 05 October 2014

Beautiful to aware people to unite and integrity can be achieved by such efforts only. It speaks words of wisdom in nice way. Nicely written every line.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 September 2014

We all have a God, unite as one...there is strength of unity in this lovely poem. Great job and nicely penned.

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Valerie Dohren 27 September 2014

Great poem Lyn, and I am sure we are all in full agreement. Sadly, man's inhumanity to man continues.

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