Tuesday, June 15, 2010

Unique And Special Comments

Rating: 5.0

Upon the ugliest rock
Sits a chest of beauty
In the sweetest fruits
Comes a hideous flaw
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Eyan Desir
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Catrina Heart 05 July 2010

everyone is made in uniqueness and special to the beholder...none is perfect all have flaws but within these flaws acceptance is shared and given with much love thus becoming perfect to the one...wonderful poem here with a nice thoughtful meaning! ! !

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Marieta Maglas 21 June 2010

Warm, captivating and completely writing.Many memorable lines in this one. Poetry is certainly in your blood. Thank you for sharing.Mari.

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Darrin Mcmiller Jr. 19 June 2010

Balance is Beautiful and Balance is life...Well not so much and that's exactly what this poem says to me nothing is absolute 'Upon the ugliest rock/Sits a chest of beauty' nice poem

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that's sweet and so true. everyone has beauty inside, just sometimez, itz hidden from the world. you wear yourz on ur sleeve eyan!

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Lady Grace 15 June 2010

my version; from the heaven angels sing from the sky moon shines from the earth grows mountains where the peaks are too high we need not to fly but we need patience to reach the above sky, , , in our hearts, we seek love we seek kindness, we seek compassion we seek for caress in our mind, we need peace we need joy to stay with ease we need smile, we need friends we need ''u''and be all graced... u r unique, u bring us joy u r special, fragile and smart ur such quiet and can't predict and we all know, ur special and unique... ur poem is nice and it is effective there's no more word, other than addicted if life will fail, dont shed a tear just ask for a hug, u will be comforted...smileeeeeeeeeeeeee

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