Saturday, March 13, 2021

Union In Difference Comments

Rating: 5.0

The trees wave in true pleasure
As the breeze kisses in full measure
Calling us to be together
Making lovely world ever after.
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Varsha M
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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 March 2021

Response (1) ANEW and corrected: So very sorry, dear Varsha, the first time i read the poem, it was a wonderful emotive touch in my heart, BUT after that I took a glance at the photograph, I burst in a hilarious laugh, as you have noticed I am honest

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 March 2021

Five excellent end-rhyming quatrains, WOW! They still mesmerize me. true poetic presentation from a passionate heart

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 March 2021

After having read time and again, the photo caused me a big laugh and by chance I have read that Grape and Ape too, today too, what a coincidence! I have enjoyed this adorable poem very much.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 March 2021

A wonderful poem with a meaningful message. Love will bridge differences.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 13 March 2021

This is remarkably lovely, with so much deep meaning and truth. It's in my List.

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