Union Comments

10... love it! ! ! i love ur writing

So creative, Well written! !

haunting, the call of the mystical... well done!

the union will happen the union of rever and union of life is entirly different. We know you cannot make it sound. Ur call from the soul is a matter of love. U shuld give to those who beg it for that the time wll come.

I like your poem.The union of the two great rivers is dramatic.We have a great song here called 'The Meeting of the Waters' about such a phenomena.

So nice poem.. But the las line it touched my soul.top marks for you

Wonderfully...10.... Best wishes, Tsira

Melted vapor and freezing, like a water i feel the words you have brought here in such interesting craft..Union is unique poem, keep writing and thanks for inviting :) _Unwritten Soul