Monday, December 15, 2008

Unidentified Frying Object Comments

Rating: 5.0

What is that on the heat?
Is it meat?
It's sizzling,
frizzling
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Francesca Johnson
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Raj Arumugam 31 December 2008

A great poem! It's far commoner to produce sad poems than successful humor and I just love the humor in this poem. The humor starts with the title (!) and i guess it's your man doing the cooking and that's why you don't know what's in store(!) . Just Love the humor and the way the poem is written!

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Alison Cassidy 27 December 2008

Your poetry has developed a quality of silliness that is quite infectious. Interesting how love does that... The title is especially clever. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Melvina Germain 27 December 2008

Unique, very nice Francesca.

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Janri Gogeshvili 15 December 2008

Interesting the manner to create an original ”labyrinth”... Nice...

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