What is that on the heat?
Is it meat?
It's sizzling,
frizzling
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Your poetry has developed a quality of silliness that is quite infectious. Interesting how love does that... The title is especially clever. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Interesting the manner to create an original ”labyrinth”... Nice...
A great poem! It's far commoner to produce sad poems than successful humor and I just love the humor in this poem. The humor starts with the title (!) and i guess it's your man doing the cooking and that's why you don't know what's in store(!) . Just Love the humor and the way the poem is written!