Saturday, October 27, 2012

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You kill by a thousand cuts?
Veiled
innuendo in far off huts
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Jahan Zeb 28 October 2012

I liked the s sound in the first part of the poem in cuts nuts huts and ruts. they feel so musical. The theme is treated well and the flow and rhythm has made it sweeter. Good write

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The Reader 28 October 2012

The real beauty of your poem gets highlighted by this beautiful line added in the poet's notes zbout the poem... :)

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