Unholy Feminine Saviour Comments

...having been there one's self...or seeing it happen to those closest to you...it's easier to immerse yourself in this verse...I love it!

Whoa this poem is hard to even know what to say about it. GOOD: I seriously liked the vocabulary and the drastic emotional language in it. The conflicting ideas within the characteristics of humans are very clever, i.e. (divine murderer, heavenly rapist, sacred thief) . BAD: Within the vague harmony there needs to be some clarity. When the reader finishes reading they should deserve to understand a bit of what is happening. The way this poem is written now doesn't supply that. It also had a sad lack of rhyme scheme and should I ever refer it to someone to read I would call it a lyrical verse instead of a poem for that reason.

I like the way you created the suspense till the last line of the poem. A well articulated and nicely penned piece. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

I like the way you created the suspense till the final line of the poem. A well articulated piece of poetry written with insight. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.