Saturday, September 15, 2012

Unheeded Comments

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Will he remain unheeded,
as the hollow one cries?
Death into his fate has been seeded,
and like an amaranth never dies.
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Soren Valentine
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Alla Simone 18 September 2012

This one is excellent. You've detailed the struggle well and more great similes abound. I was gonna copy and paste my fav. lines but that would be literally copying and pasting the whole thing. Love it!

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