Unheard Silence Comments

it's the simplicity and rawness of the words that make this poem poignant. it gives a disturbing yet tangible lump in the throat.it cannot be dismissed as sentimental because the honesty is pure.it leaves one wondering what happens next, wanting to reach out and assure that everything can possibly get better.

Trust often a breaker, however...I believe that it is possible to meet someone, and it just never becomes a question...each person knows. Perhaps through love, or a strong sense of faith. The children can learn from this, wisdom will not come out of bashing one another...but through a sense of justice that they can be a stronger parent and make different choices when they grow. Excellent poem,

Denise, Wow! This is a very powerful piece, and expertly penned. Well done. Shannon