Sunday, May 25, 2014

Unheard Melody Comments

Rating: 5.0

I fear my words
Will broke your dreams
And fly away the melody
From me to thy.
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sekharan pookkat
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Valsa George 17 March 2019

.........past will haunt Present will pay The most meaningful lines in the poem! Past mistakes and past glories can only haunt us. But the present gives us dividends! So instead of longing for the past or regretting about past failures, we have to work in the present and it will definitely pay! A meaningful poem. A 10

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Lydia Monet 27 May 2014

I like the part about the flowers :)

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Very nice imagination of your poem. Wonderful...

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