Monday, October 5, 2009
Unheard Cries Comments
Rating: ★5.0
She sits alone with her tears at night no one hears her cries,
She sits alone in darkness without a fright,
As the smell of blood stings her nose,
But she knows that no one is there to even care,
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05 October 2009
I like the message you are trying to give. Try putting this into Stanzas. I think it would give more emotion to it if you did that. Besides that, real nice job.
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7/27/2025 5:53:34 PM # 1.0.0
Again Julia you have a way with your words. You certainly know how to move emotion...it turned my moments while reading....