Tuesday, April 28, 2009

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The streaming droplets of water
Are a reflection of my soul,
Carving canyons of sorrow as
They drip down the window.
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Lynne Crandall
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Sam Fitts 01 May 2009

You must have a lot on your mind, if you have canyons of sorrow in your soul and pent up thunderous emotions

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Mckenzie Spaulding 30 April 2009

Wow Lynne! Seriously...this is so good! !

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'The rumble of thunder Is actually a suppressed shudder' are powerful lines written with onomatopoeic skill.

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