Unguarded Word......Think Before U Speak! Comments

Really nice stated thank you for sharing and thank you for my comment on abortion

Words that make or break. Amazing rhymes, indeed.

Excellently rhymed each word is a chosen word.A fabulous poem.

excellent poem.........its superb sir sat...... poem presents ur message in an emphatic manner so i like it very much & also word association supports ur thinking & thought very much i think i rate this poem more than 10000000000000

Don’t let hang loose your tongue…if you do so you’ll be …well you all know …excellent stuff…perfect wording…loved it Mr. Poet Saadat Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

Dear Saadat, there is a hidden rhyme zone and a dictionary inside your head and heart wherefrom spring forth perfectly strung colourful garlands of words.. I like the title which teaches the effectiveness of the unguarded word by the following poem...you are a master..I salute....thanks for your comment too

Hello Saadat.. I haven't read too much thought provoking ones recently.... Just turned to your page, ... I should say this poem got the usual Saadat Tahir flavor in it.... Strongest will and hardy soul. Char and writhe on carmine coal. Words said, unsaid, worlds apart. Volley’s sent, will raze ramparts Very strong and powerful, diction here.... and you are very professional when it comes to composing poems.. Great.... Cheeers shan

loose tongue and lip eh......liked your poem Saadat... Ruthy

A dazzling quatrains with a great rhyme scheme......powerful and profound! ! ! !

I agree with Mamta and Amaryllius, there are strong words here, getting into deeper images. Rhyming is fine,10 ++

'A great write' i must say! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Unguarded word...agree with you..though I should be true I often speak before I think..but I work on it.. :) your way with words always amazes me and makes me recite your poems immediately to listen how they sound in air, and to feel the power of sounds on an emotional level..and then to read it some times to get more into an idea..always deep and encouraging..thanks for sharing, Saadat. Amary.

Fine imageries fine expressions! 10+

think before u speak! , nice idea well penned poem too Luwi

nicely done.'think before u speak is a good habit..

will do sir...! ! let me think............hmmmm.... and may i say...great poetry here...! !

Sadaat you really have a way with words- charming indeed, i am sure in speech as well as in writing. you come out with most unusual images, and there is always a stroke of your humour in your poems. whenever i read your poems, i have to read them aloud, becuase listening enhances the pleasure. weell to use a cliche unmindful speech hurts more than a wound by an arrow. mindfulness in speech is the basis of healthy relationships and dialogue. Mamta

Strongest will and hardy soul. Char and writhe on carmine coal. Words said, unsaid, worlds apart. Volley’s sent, will raze ramparts lovley style and easy to rememebr the advice.. iloved it to the extent and enjoyed....10 read mine goden words..prayer..o lord

I love your writing style.You do have a way with words.Beautiful poetry!

Tongues to airs, wings have lent. Hath words to many, a gallows sent. Deadened eyes to rainbows womb, spured fear to tear to life entomb. Oh! ....strong words...well conceived....liked your thought process...10++