Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, August 30, 2012

Ungrateful World Comments

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I may be called unfaithful
If I say "world is ungrateful"
"People are unresponsive"
"Despite my being obedient and submissive"
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 August 2012

good pesentation Juan Trevino2 minutes ago The poem shows great depth and paints a good picture. Comment 0 like it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 August 2012

Rachel Turner4 minutes ago good work.. Comment 0 You should revise

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 August 2012

Jesse Irwin1 minute ago You've got some solid points that you could expand on or put more poetically. Work on the flow and the rhymes. Gr

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 August 2012

I may be called unfaithful If I say “world is ungrateful”

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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