I may be called unfaithful
If I say "world is ungrateful"
"People are unresponsive"
"Despite my being obedient and submissive"
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Rachel Turner4 minutes ago good work.. Comment 0 You should revise
Jesse Irwin1 minute ago You've got some solid points that you could expand on or put more poetically. Work on the flow and the rhymes. Gr
I may be called unfaithful If I say “world is ungrateful”
good pesentation Juan Trevino2 minutes ago The poem shows great depth and paints a good picture. Comment 0 like it