Ungrateful Sorrow Comments

When eyelid will close all will be true Maya only. Wisely conceived poem.

Intense poem. I well written or translated?

.........a thought provoking poem on having faith in things unseen ★

nice poem i thought it was a very interesting aspect of life

When I let you grasp me you call it a deception....yet I remain concealed...why do you hold your faith in me with such conviction.....beautiful lines containing a haunting question....it is troubling to all. Each one of us finds a way to answer it. The answer to it has never been simple and straightforward.

i looked at the crescent moon...and yet when i remain concealed.....beautiful poem by the poet who is not to be assessed by a small poet like me...

Beautifully envisioned meaningful poem dealing with some sapects of the philosophy of life. Thanks for sharing it here.

Yet, think again! Able to understand the ways of life. Thanks for sharing.

I looked at the crescent moon hidden behind the tamarisk tree outside my window. As if the dear departed one is smiling and playing hide-and-seek with me. Beautiful lines Guruji, That is why you are so great and the Viswakabi. Thanks off my little heart. Subhas