Saturday, August 7, 2021

Unfulfilled Love Comments

Rating: 3.9

I dream of her, and rightly so;
she causes my old blood to flow
and makes my heart beat very fast;
my love for her will always last.
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Cowboy Ron Williams
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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 November 2021

What after comes this line, 'but I know that my love is real'...is wonderful.

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Susan Williams 01 November 2021

faved this cuties as well

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Susan Williams 01 November 2021

your poetry so often makes our heart smile warmly at life and shared experiences---5 star poem from a five star poet!

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Jan Framewell 08 August 2021

It's called unrequited love.

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M Asim Nehal 08 August 2021

Love can happen at any age and anytime, I suppose you will gather enough courage to let her know your true feelings. Better Late than never. Fantastic poem and please upload your dream-girls.5*****

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Kim Barney 08 August 2021

Also, Sylvia, you are misinformed as to the marital status of the person you mentioned. She is NOT married, as her husband passed away last year. Or was it earlier this year? Anyway, she is now single.

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Kim Barney 08 August 2021

This is not a ‘Love at First Sight' poem, Sylvia. This is a ‘I have Loved You Forever But Am Too Shy to Tell You' poem.

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Kim Barney 08 August 2021

Great poem, Ron! Too bad you had to remove the picture because of the misunderstanding. I would have liked to see it.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 08 August 2021

Sylvia, Please read the poet's note which I have just added!

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Cowboy Ron Williams 08 August 2021

Dear Sylvia and LeeAnn, thank you very much for commenting!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 08 August 2021

Yr heart is in the right place. Love the poem Bravo!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 August 2021

5 Stars for this Love At First Sight Poem, dear Ron, I must confide you that Belle is married, but you got 5 Stars from me.BTW I don't think you are that old.

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