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A profound poem in beautiful tell tale, great write and Thanks for sharing.

You held me captive to the end with each and every word.

Her deep blue eyes which could mesmerize heaven's soul ''They had seen the world with million stories untold Unfulfilled dreams within them, unsatisfied thoughts Yet so articulate, so elude and certainly so bold'' brilliant description! brilliant image, nice words, good flow excellent poem and as sir Martin O'Neil says.

A really great poem, like it a great write. may i invite you to read my new poem called, The Crow Flies.

A beautifully told story - I was unable to tear my eyes off the page! I had to know the next line. Great images, wonderful descriptions and a fantastic sense of narrative. Bravo! There are a couple of spelling/grammar points I could help you with that will not affect the rhythm or flow as it simply require s a few minor adjustments here and there. I have looked at them to make sure it could be done without affecting your natural rhythm which is brilliant. Notwithstanding that, this is a superb piece of poetic storytelling. Well done.

This is a great poem Kumar, really enjoyed reading, and such a sad ending to the story.