Unfragmented... Comments

wonderful poem subtely expressed with a strong point made

i love this one...particularly this line -> IF ONLY YOU COULD....we could write every word after that line, , , but at the end it always runs back to IF ONLY.... ;)

There is some vagueness here but the message is transmitted and the water device clarifies the poem as well. This is a clear exposition of love expressed to calm resolution of difficulties. The staying of rash conclusions, always a Heavenly wish. GW62

its like flowing in clear waters, , , great flow and thought

Honestly dear lovely lady You have a very nice style a powerful imagination that when developed can define words of wisdom so fine. thanks, melvin

its very enchanting and vivid. you got the touch candice. keep going.

Wonderfully done Candice.

Life is made of phases, stages, degrees and levels of experiences; on whatever aspect a person is in his life there is always a so called an ACID TEST! First times IMPRINT a lasting impressions on oneself and outlooks in life: Be it love, dreams and other endeavors, we always wish it could be the best! However, life is not perfect so let us take it as it comes learning its lessons to become better. We cannot control our fate but we have choices of better options, while young take the best ways you believed. A 10.