Unfound Narrator Comments

Lynette, you have talent but it isn't really displayed in this piece. Repeating the same beginning on each line is an over-used technique, probably the number one stylistic cliche. in poetry. Good thing I know you can do better. Regards.

This poem is fantastic. I like it very much.. well done! HBH

Excellent Lynette. There is guts in this in case you didn't know. H

You are not missing you are poet and good poet JFLG