Unfortunately This Is On No Bathroom Walls Comments

i must be missing something in this poem. perhaps it is irony standing in my way? i don't 'do well' with symbolism. but it seems obvious the words are not all meant to be taken seriously. Are they? ARE THEY! ! ! ? ? ? YOU're just talking about Canada, right? Right! ! ! bri ;) i must move to another.

I may have different thinking than what you may want us to get, but truly when i read this what come to my mind is it can be adults themselves and it can be a growing new generation that now has no one able to guide them, the childish mentality is all about to survive in this life, the weak will lost and stronger will win. what Ali said also interesting, nice senryu dear!

I think, not one percent of the population is by mental age. . walls of bathrooms kind of social media. .. adults are to die. and simply.. majority is authority. Sad poem and brilliant work.

Hi Lemon. I think, not one percent of the population is by mental age. .. walls of bathrooms kind of social media. .. adults are to die. and simply.. majority is authority. Sad poem and brilliant work.

Oh, by the way, best title ever! ! !

That is talent- to place horror and humor, irony and metaphor- -in 11 words and thereby grab your readers by the throat and put them on their knees where they belong in this age [and in every age to be sure] but this age has the maniacs with their egotistical fat fingers on the nuclear button. On my fav list 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Reminds me of Pac-Man! M.J. another great Senryu from a master poet! Also reminds me of that commercial in which the toddlers take on the roles of adults. You've met all your criteria: horror humour irony metaphor. And you've done it brilliantly!