Thursday, March 19, 2009

Unforgiving Gates Comments

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As I enter the unforgiving gates,
the valley opens wide for me to see
There are millions of people just standing around,
whispering what they wish they'd done
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Sarah Green
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Allan O 06 November 2009

short but quite intense...you are a fine writer...thank you again Sarah ~^..^

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Great Writing....I like the title too. Great job Keep it up

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~ Jon London ~ 20 March 2009

Where we go from here, and what we will be shown, is the true meaning of life it self, nice work my dear

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Sarah Green

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