Unforgiven Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

Unforgiven

Rating: 5.0


I don't know why I thought she would change
I thought I would be closer
Now that my Mum has died
She's up to her old tricks again
Thinking I have forgotten
Right now, I still licking my wounds
With Mum's death and the confusion I have
I want to leave but I'm too afraid
I don't have the cash
And too sad to have pleasure anyway
I am too numb to find a direction
I wish my Mum would have been there
To tell her off
Now, she knows she can stab me in the heart
Because there's no one to protect me
She's unforgiven
I should've realised that

Tuesday, June 14, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
for my Aunt Esther
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miss Grace 14 June 2022

Wonderful expression of the problem faced by the poet...

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Richard Wlodarski 14 June 2022

LeeAnn, I commend, and respect you, for having the courage to write this heart wrenching poem. It sounds like an environment that's counterproductive to your well being. Please find a way to resolve the situation. You have so much to offer!

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A poem coming from the heart of the poet, against injustice meted out to her. This is a bold protest, at the same time, it is a reminder to herself that she should not succumb to such pressures. Good poem. Wish her best.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 14 June 2022

This brings tears to my eyes. I wish I could hold you and hug you and tell you that everything will be OK. Your aunt may have unknown problems of her own, but it's always nice when relatives can be close and share each other's burdens.

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Extremely saddened to hear about your sorrow of mother's death and someone else who is troubling you. you.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 16 June 2022

A well written poem. I hope and pray that you can find a pathway to peace with your aunt, LeeAnn I am so sorry for your troubles and for your loss.

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Anjandev Roy 16 June 2022

Excellent poetic expression.....i am saddened...

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 June 2022

A well expressed poem with wonderful poetic expressions.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 June 2022

A deeply poignant and touching poem. I concur with Dr. Geeta's comment; in God's own time, you will forgive and forget what she did and with ardent prayers, she will ultimately change.

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With prayers, all will be resolved dear LeeAnn.....A sad poem....10

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