Saturday, November 2, 2013

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Today I saw a brilliant red flower
Crushed under the wheels of a car.
It lay afterward, sprawled on the road,
Its floral entrails hideously exposed.
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Aneesha Roy
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Valsa George 29 November 2013

The crushing wheels whizzed past, unmindful of the damage done. The silent pain died down without even a whimper! This often happens in the case of humans! Cruel are the ways of the world and it is insensitive to others' pain! A remarkable write and a10 for its disciplined diction!

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Dinesan Madathil 15 November 2013

When art and beauty die the world is deprived of a culture.. I too shed tears for the mangled flower in your poem.. Let there be more flowers blooming.

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