Sunday, May 17, 2009

Unforgettable Memory Comments

Rating: 4.2

By noon, my life turned upside down.
Turned to shallow and panicky.
When all your bags were packed up.
When you were ready to go.
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Delicate Heart
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Breakup of love is so devastating

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Chinedu Dike 28 November 2014

The emotion of love lingers long after its source of stimulation is gone. Love is spiritual, it touches one with spiritual experience. A lovely poem well articulated and penned with insight. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Jessica Dehn 10 July 2014

beautiful! You have a great way of allowing your feelings out and allowing others to feel them through your words!

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Life Poem 13 June 2009

Love love love it! -Ilana

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a touching and well penned poem..10+++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 May 2009

Beautiful touching composition 10+++

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Winnie Angel 30 May 2009

dera poet ur poem have the truth to touch every heart.....simply beautiful..

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 30 May 2009

Your tormented life is her triumph, over love, so great! ! !

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 May 2009

Touchy 10

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Ency Bearis 26 May 2009

impressive write...well narrated with feelings..great piece...10

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Noha El3wdy 21 May 2009

deep feelings, broken emotions wish it isnt a real experience

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Toni Bellanger 20 May 2009

I loved the form and the picture the poem painted was so clear. I felt every line.

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Trade Martin 19 May 2009

If he or she reads this, he or she will return. Flows nicely.! ! !

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Taylor S 19 May 2009

Wonderful poetry. I can imagine it as if i was there Keep on writting :)

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Mona Martinez 19 May 2009

wow....very expressive and creative....so full of emotion..good job! ! ! i liked it.. :)

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Howard Johnson 19 May 2009

A very enjoyable and pleasing write, thank you for sharing

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Fay Slimm 19 May 2009

The narrative is strong therefore holds the reader - - a fine verse of honest phrasing and well deserves a 10 - - best wishes from Fay.

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Beautiful poem! ! ! ! Great job! ! ! 10++

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Rosalita Fernandez 18 May 2009

woah this is fabulous! well done, truely amazing write

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Maya Hershey 18 May 2009

OMG! ! i like the poem! ! its so beautiful that i read it over and over and over! ! wow reallly its one of the poems that made me inspired and intregued... so keep up! ! ur best! ! ! maya

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