By noon, my life turned upside down.
Turned to shallow and panicky.
When all your bags were packed up.
When you were ready to go.
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The emotion of love lingers long after its source of stimulation is gone. Love is spiritual, it touches one with spiritual experience. A lovely poem well articulated and penned with insight. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
beautiful! You have a great way of allowing your feelings out and allowing others to feel them through your words!
dera poet ur poem have the truth to touch every heart.....simply beautiful..
Your tormented life is her triumph, over love, so great! ! !
I loved the form and the picture the poem painted was so clear. I felt every line.
If he or she reads this, he or she will return. Flows nicely.! ! !
Wonderful poetry. I can imagine it as if i was there Keep on writting :)
wow....very expressive and creative....so full of emotion..good job! ! ! i liked it.. :)
The narrative is strong therefore holds the reader - - a fine verse of honest phrasing and well deserves a 10 - - best wishes from Fay.
OMG! ! i like the poem! ! its so beautiful that i read it over and over and over! ! wow reallly its one of the poems that made me inspired and intregued... so keep up! ! ur best! ! ! maya
Breakup of love is so devastating