Unforgettable Dream Comments

superb..loved these lines..Return me to my usual sleep On the bed of seclusion The daybreak is nearing I will soon be awake From another unforgettable dream..thanks

wow...Break the prison of darkness Show me the dawn Coming up in your eyes Flashing keen desire beams Drench me in the insatiable light...earnest desire onthe part of beloved..beautifully depicted inwords...i admire it...10 read mineall dreams not come true.... a place called......all trains stop here

beautiful love on the part of a woman and only a woman...excellent

A dream powerful love, with powerul words and force will force every reader to his teens.10 shanmugaml