Unforgettable. Comments

Absolutely love this!

haha, love this...i'm glad he turned out to be a seal.... he'll never break your heart!

This poem is filmic in quality. I can see that beautiful, brown-eyed marvel of nature, and those feelings of awe are palpable. This poem transports the reader to paradise. S :)

Your poem offers a combination of nature and human emotion. At first, brown eyes give no hint to who or what. I like that. Enjoyable! You describe sight and feelings well in this. Fun and interesting to read. Deborah Cromer

Stared with an ........................impudent playful Gaze, saying he ....................... wanted me near. I obeyed, .............. and soon without fear He swam closer, ................ head up and moving. Rachel Ann Butler

My dear Fay, an unforgettable experience indeed. You and that beautiful seal together in a better and brighter world if only for a moment. Exceptional.10/10. Love, SandraX

Adventure of the mermaid at the new... Pleasant version, Fay..10... Tsira

This scene is indelibly etched in your soul The water, the seal, filled a memory hole the excitement, the coolness, the look in his eyes you truly were blessed, one of life's highs!

A beautiful poem Fay.....your presentation too is very interesting..10+++

Fay, love the layout. Hope your poem is something that really happened. Well written as always.10/10 Regards, Ian