Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, May 23, 2014

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After four days of my reporting on duty
I was blessed with male child by almighty
“The beautiful rose flower has arrived” brother wrote
I was in so much joy but believed in blessings too
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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This verse bears a universal sadness when fathers cannot be with their needy ones as death has struck. A vividly powerful write my friend. 23 May by Fay Slimm | Reply

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Colleen Courtney 23 May 2014

What an incredibly sad poem. I feel there is nothing more soul shattering than the death of a child. You've written this piece with so much feeling.

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lost Tawana Johnson33 minutes ago Trying to figure where you were going with this poem. And when I couldn't I just stopped!

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Pathetic Subhashchandra Adhav14 minutes ago True feelings Good take Comment +1

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After four days of my reporting on duty I was blessed with male child by almighty

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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