Monday, February 11, 2008

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i may have told you i lik you so much
and i still think of the last i felt your touch.
over and over i replay in my mind
the day i lost you and the day i'll find
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chantel shoats
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Godspower Oshodin 18 November 2008

i really like your rhyming scheme in this one, it's a beautiful piece! keep up the good work

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