Tuesday, June 14, 2016

Unfit Comments

Rating: 5.0

Trying to figure out,
What makes us tic,
Why bother?
Why want to know?
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Sandra Feldman
COMMENTS
Kelly Kurt 14 June 2016

Though we are not fit to tell time, We may indeed be clocks. Wound tight, alarms set and seldom reading correctly

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Susan Williams 14 June 2016

Sandra, I admire the way you pare down the words to the essential. I am a firm believer in brevity- -probably because I can never achieve it. Brevity forces us to find the right word, the right phrase, and to share the message with no excess baggage slowing it down or causing the message to drift off target. Excellent write, my friend. Deserving a 10 so I gave you one!

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Udaya R. Tennakoon 14 June 2016

wonderful! ! ! dear Sandra.. thanks for sharing

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