Unfinished Task Comments

This sense of 'incompleteness' is there in most of us! But it is better than a false sense complacency.....! The urge to improve more is an incentive to strive and win. But if the thought of unfulfilled task grows to the extent of nagging one, it has to be checked. Only by connecting oneself to the Higher Being, one can overcome this sense of inadequacy! A beautiful write of deep introspection! This is one of your best writings, Savita! (10)

greatly penned- Darkness encircles me My best is never enough excellent

Thais is a beautiful poem on reflections reflects clearly. Beautiful poem having touching and moving expression based on metaphor. I quote..... Like a waterless Cloud with silvery skin And grey passions, I weather the storm. This strange sense increases day by day Even in dreams it doesn't leave. Thanks for sharing.10

O! World O! life This search, this cry seems imbecilic Yet this sense of unfinished business Lingers in my broken bones................touching expression! Liked it so much dear madam (10)

unfinished task reflects much in heart and mind, for it sweats the brain again sometimes heart quick beats, ...... still unfinished task being shadow comes behind, sits and lies beside, ..... well done, thanks for sharing the poem with us here in poemhunter

Savita, to be unfulfilled leaves an emptiness. Well expressed.++10