Sunday, January 15, 2012

Unfinished Story Of Life Comments

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It's running its course,
the unfinished story of my life.....
having many untold secrets....
like the dark-clouds of the sky..
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Sajna Kailas 18 January 2012

wow amazing Rose, like an Innocent lonesome child's whine! loved the comparison's used! ! ! ! !

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Raj Arumugam 18 January 2012

very skilful lines, Rose - the poem draws the reader into its mood and emotion...enjoyable read

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